When I die, a tear or two will be shed by earthly vendors...
All but later normalcy holds...
My soul will stay unaltered...
In dilemma to leave or not...
It lingers in high thoughts for moments infinite...
For whom I lived is the unanswered query...
Because the last thing i loved in life was myself!
omg darling....ur world lies in ur fingertips and its imprinted thru ur words dear!! lovely :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is a start...i would always welcome intense criticism also which would help me to grow...thank u lechu 4 being the starting point of this initiative...
ReplyDeleteits gud that u hv strtd loving thy self.... however u seem to be thinking that u r not affecting anybody's life...whic is an illusion created by u for u.....no matter how closed v try to be, v continue to affect a lot many people than we think...important is thAt u affect positively the life around u dear....tc
ReplyDeletei dont know how one cud interpret it...bt thing is dat i dont think u cud get my sense rite...its dat i strtd loving myself d last...dat wud mean a whole set of equations of love and care i had for people other dan myself in life...wat i said is not abt how it effects others or not bt how equations of love and care fail when one fails to love thyself...i did that because that calls for what i feel...i loved others and i counted myself as the last equation in the ambit of love...yes...bt dat was a honest comment...a very productive one...i could recognite my thoughts again u gave me a new wave of thinking...thank u...
ReplyDeleteyour query is not unanswered.... aft all the journey of life is for self only cos our happiness lies deep within ourselves... and believe me only the true blood turns meaning full tears which live even aft our death..
ReplyDeletejourney of life is for self bt wher doth it take when u stop living for urself...a point wher u cease to be u...even the soul feels an identity crush...a feeling when all is about u and still not u...
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